Mindful writing — the art of paying attention
Your observations always send a little shiver of recognition through me, Rosemary. I'm glad there is still laughter between you.
Always, Barb. :)
Sounds like my Chihuahua, who strikes the dead dog pose when he sleeps! You have caught a moment that intrigues with its gnomic facticity. I like it this way.
It's like a riddle, charming in its simplicity.
smiles...nice...i am glad that life is found in play and laughter...
The stark contrast between the two stanzas is a perfect iteration of how life can rouse from absence.
Duality within and without, and great use of contrast.
It's as though you were here. I'm living the paradox these days. Exquisite observation and execution.
It's really amazing when we think of it, Rosemary! Just a little encouragement or persuasion is all. It can do wonders to a depressed soul! Excellent thinking!Hank