My deaf cat
in heavy rain
a tiny green tree frog
gives huge voice –
his joy my comfort
its deep steady throb
sodden ground
greening as new weeds
split the mulch
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rain-soaked Spring –
perhaps this Summer
no bushfires?
Haiku nights: going to bed with Issa again; he’s wintering too.
Notes:
I'm reading this book (pictured) in bed every night lately; at present looking at his winter haiku – while it's winter for me too just now, here in the Southern Hemisphere.
Written for Weekly Scribblings #78 at Poets and Storytellers United, where Magaly invites us to choose one of several micro-forms.
Ironic, perhaps, that I didn't choose a haiku to reference Issa, one of the great haiku masters. But then, this piece is more senryu than haiku – and an American sentence can be either ... or neither.
[Is a poem actually working when the explanations are longer than it?]
yellow blooms
dot the hillside
above the town
a stand of palms
tall and spindly –
heads move together
the mountain
is truncated, smoothed
by swathing cloud
white truck
blocks the lane –
car wriggles past
red sign
juts from a spread
of pale grey roofs
March afternoon –
clouds fill the sky
curls of grey
the church roof
rises in a point
aimed at the sky
a small mend
in the wire mesh
focuses my gaze
Some friends asked me, 'Teach us to write haiku.' As a start, I told them to write three-line observations of what they saw around us – plain descriptions, in present tense. 'These are not haiku,' I explained, 'but will put you into the mind-set of haiku.' I wrote with them, and later realised that what I had produced was (of course!) a series of small stones.