BRAVO
poetry slam –
my friend and I
tie for third
Photo on postcard – rather more than a mere snapshot! –
© Andi Islinger 1996, used with permission.
(The following 'word snapshots' were views
from the other side and much further down.)
1. Looking up
Last time I looked up, The Pinnacle rose from mist; now it’s whited out.
Waterfalls of cloud curl over the mountain rim, a frothing torrent.
Pockets of mist stay, lingering around the foot of the jutting peak.
On the mountaintop a line of tree silhouettes, back-dropped by white sky.
2. Looking around
All green – grass, trees, hills; at the tip of a long stem, one red hibiscus.
Purple, red, yellow lanterns outside my window – the flowering trees.
A butterfly poised white on the end of a stem – the azalea sways.
In the farthest tree, suddenly a bright red flash – a rosella feeds.
The hibiscus dips: a magpie has glided in; it perches, head cocked.
Moss on stone; bare stone pointing finger-like to sky; bare sky; one small cloud.
***
Side view of The Pinnacle: the central, sharply pointed peak.
The 'word snapshots' were viewed from the bottom
of what is here the left face. (Photo mine.)
When, 30 years ago, my late husband Andrew Wade and I came to live in the Northern Rivers region of NSW, Australia, we rented a house for the first few years under a peak called The Pinnacle, not far from a village named Tyalgum. This weekend I'm one of the featured poetry readers at a one-day festival in Tyalgum, so I fished out some of the poems I wrote back then. These above were originally supposed to be haiku. I didn't know how to write haiku then – I thought it was just a matter of syllable count. So I have now discarded some, slightly rewritten others and turned them into American sentences (invented by Allen Ginsberg as a Western version of haiku). Each sentence is a separate snapshot in words.
Sharing this post (off-prompt) with Friday Writings #110 at Poets and Storytellers United.
where were you stuck
in the time of COVID –
together? apart?
The small daily poems I've set myself to write this year are gradually being removed to a new blog (click to find): My Book of Days.
Small stones are meant to be outward-looking, whereas my daily poems have become more and more self-reflective, so I decided they don't belong here but need a blog of their own.
22. EVENING
first open the doors
letting the cool air inside —
then shut out the dark
23. VESPERS
Vespers, no —
I pray informally
any old time.
24. BEDTIME
elderly cat
inspects to make sure
I’m tucked in safe
25. ELEVENTH HOUR
my 83 years
feel lovely, but I wonder —
should I write faster?
26. MIDNIGHT SNACK
just one bite
of dark chocolate
before bed
*
if I can’t sleep
toasted raisin bread
and hot cocoa
27. DEAD OF NIGHT / WITCHING HOUR /
WEE SMALL HOURS.
second wind
I stay up ’til three
in secret
I like being
the only one awake
in the quiet
28. THE LAST HOUR
friends tell me
that unconvincing lie:
plenty of time
*
the last hour but
so many books still to read –
and to write
15. HAPPY HOUR
alone now
I raise a glass to you
happily
16. DINNER/SUPPER
‘Come to supper!’ —
puzzling ‘til we found
she meant dinner
(dinner: evening meal
supper: the snack before bed —
but in which country?)
17. GOLDEN HOUR / MAGIC HOUR
that long moment
when light intensifies —
just before dark
18.SUNSET
sunset —
the long night
stretches
19. BLUE HOUR
the blue hour
the closing door
the silence
20. TWILIGHT
interface
between light and dark —
space for magic
21. DUSK
gradual dusk —
the hills across the way
begin to dim
8: ELEVENSES
time to stop
for a hard-earned cuppa —
elevenses
9: NOON:
midday pause —
a breath before afternoon’s
flattening heat
10: LUNCH
ladies who lunch –
I joined them after
widowhood
11: MIDDAY
walking away
casting no shadow —
disappearing
12: NAPTIME
my cat and me —
two old girls napping
together
13: TEATIME
hot scones, jam and cream —
not in sub-tropic summer
thanks very much!
14. AFTERNOON
afternoon rain
a hint of thunder —
don’t go out!